RETURN TO PROMISE
By Debbie Macomber
Mira Romance
October 2000
ISBN # 1-55166-613-8
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"Return to Promise" is the
sequel to "Promise, Texas" where the reader
is given a chance to drop back into this small town
to
check up on the residents. Where "Promise"
offered us a voyeurs chance to virtually spy on several families
and personal lives "Return" only focus's on a single
couple, Cal and Jane Patterson.
Cal Patterson is a rancher. He's a quiet man
who loves his family deeply. His marriage is as perfect as
the ideal marriage can get. But when a woman from Cal's past
comes back to Promise his life is suddenly turned upside down
through misunderstanding and an unwillingness to listen on
both his part and his wife's. Cal's a proud man and refuses
to give in because his pride won't let him. He's done nothing
wrong and until his wife sees that there will always be a
rif between them as wide as the Grand Canyon.
Jane is one of the areas doctors who is known
locally as Dr Texas. There's no doubt in her mind that Cal
is the perfect man for her. And her two children are proof
of the love they share for one another. Up until the day of
the local rodeo Jane never thought that there was anything
that could come between them. The first warning flag is when
Cal enters the bull riding without telling her, constituting
in her mind as a lie. The next is when he doesn't tell her
about the woman he met ringside after his win. The final straw
comes when Cal neglects to tell Jane that this mysterious
woman came to their house while she and the kids were back
in California to see her ailing father. Cal refuses to see
her side in the dispute so she decides to take her children
back to California until he sees sense.
I've always enjoyed Ms Macomber's books. "Promise,
Texas" was an interesting, almost refreshing, look into
the goings on in a small town. When "Return to Promise"
was released I was anxious to see what adventures were in
store. I found the story to be a quick read and the characters
stayed true to their original creation. While staying true
to original, I appreciated such a realistic foundation to
the plot. It's so easy to see how a single misunderstanding
can affect the outcome of a situation. And when two people
with such strong wills collide in disagreement sometimes the
outcome can be catastrophic. Cal and Jane are two such people.
As much as I enjoyed the story, it was not
without its faults. I found Cal to be hardheaded and unrealistically
unreasonable at times. And Jane is untraditionally narrow-minded.
Where Cal is uncharacteristically open and willing to discuss
their marital problems, Jane is shut off and sees only what
she wants to see. Jane keeps her vow to prove herself right
for so long that she starts looking divorce in the eye, and
she makes it Cal's responsibility, in the end, to make things
right. In the end, I was left with conflicting feelings over
the story. On one side there was a comfortable familiarity
with the town of Promise and the residents but on the other
side was the childish portrayal of the characters.
Many issues were left unanswered as well,
which I can only assume will come in a later inclusion in
the story of Promise. For this particular story, I was left
wanting something more. Particularly the answers to what Cal
and Jane will do to keep their marriage strong since the woman
at the heart of their problems still has her eyes on Cal;
what Annie, Jane's best friend, will do since the woman is
in her employ, and why Cal is so unsupportive of Jane in her
time of need with her sick father.
"Return to Promise" is a nice sequel
to "Promise, Texas", but I can only hope that there
is another book to follow that will answers the questions to
the irregularity of this book.