TIMELESS WISH
By Barbara Sheridan
Jove Time Passages Romance
ISBN # 0-515-12499-0
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"Timeless Wish" by first time
author Barbara Sheridan begins with a wish that crosses
all boundaries of time. Laura Bennett, in New York 1998,
wishes on the New Year for a happy new life at
the same time that Corby Hillhouse,
in Oklahoma 1848, wishes for a woman his love won't kill. Laura's
happy new life begins the moment she agrees to help friends
Jake and Galen Hillhouse, restore their family home in Oklahoma.
Corby finds the woman of his dreams lying in the bushes behind
his brother's home. Laura must find a way to tell Corby about
her life in 1998 and Corby must find a away to let go of his
past, a past that will keep him from the things he wished for
- Laura and love.
When Laura Bennett decides to help friends
restore a family home she has no idea that she would be catapulted
into the past and into the arms of the man she'd been drooling
over since arriving in Oklahoma, a man dead for nearly 100
years. It's not long before Laura is accepted into the Hillhouse
home as family despite a mysterious past that she can't reveal.
New friend Star arranges for Laura to take on a job as Corby's
housekeeper and nanny for his 4-year-old daughter, Sabrina.
Laura grows to love Sabrina as her own child and wishes that
the three of them could be one big happy family, but she knows
there are things in Corby's past preventing him from getting
close to her. Laura grows more nervous as the days pass and
she wonders just how long Fate will let her stay.
Corby Hillhouse made a wish on something he
thought was never possible. Laura Bennett's mysterious appearance
is enough to make him think again. As the days pass he sees
the love pour out of her for his daughter and tries to grasp
a little of it for himself. But his past keeps getting in
the way, reminding him that his love will eventually kill
her as it has his two previous wives. Just when Laura was
managing to break down the walls around his wounded heart
she disappears as unexpectedly as she shows up. Corby retreats
back into himself and becomes despondent that yet another
woman he's loved has left him, and left him wondering if he'll
ever find the woman meant for him.
I really enjoyed Sheridan's 'old west' setting.
Her quality of description brought back memories of all those
years of "Little House on the Prairie". The development
between Laura and 4-year-old Sabrina was perfect. Sabrina
is every parents dream child. She's bright, thoughtful and
funny. As well as a delight to read. What I admired most was
Laura's strength. This is a woman that can take care of herself.
Not only is she a Karate expert but when she finds herself
having to fend for herself she doesn't waste time pouting
but goes straight forward to get what she wants, even where
Corby is concerned.
Corby is a confusing character though. Just
when I thought I had him figured out he does or says something
that makes me re-read the passage to make sure that I read
right the first time. Some examples are: Corby is an Indian
as well as the town sheriff in an all white town at the turn
of the century. This made me question Sheridan's historical
details. Also, I didn't understand Corby's motivation where
the towns prostitute was concerned. He seemed to just use
her until Laura comes into his life then tosses the prostitute
aside without any explanation. After ten years satisfying
his needs she loves Corby. His actions towards her add an
excellent excuse to cause Corby grief, but still doesn't lend
his character any credibility.
The biggest problem I had with this character
was trying to gauge Corby's strengths as a hero. He's written
into a strong roll as a towns sheriff, and given that he's
an Indian in that roll gives him added strength and determination
to do his job well to earn the towns respect. But his actions
tell another story. He abandons a his young daughter at his
brother's house, constantly runs away from personal issues
and seems to get teary eyed at the drop of a hat. And when
it comes to his love for Laura he doesn't seem willing to
fight for it.
Thought I had some difficulty with the first
half of "Timeless Wish" I think Sheridan found her
stride to drive home a very nice ending. As a first effort,
"Timeless Wish" is a pleasant read. I believe that
more experience will make Barbara Sheridan a much sought after
author.